In this awesome degisn of things you actually get an A with regard to effort. Where exactly you actually lost us was in the facts. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct at this point. Having said that, allow me say to you just what did deliver the results. The text is quite persuasive and this is most likely the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can notice a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not confident of exactly how you seem to connect the details which inturn help to make the final result. For the moment I will yield to your point but wish in the future you connect your dots much better.